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The chart illustrates about the changes in three different of cases in Manchester city centre between 2003 to 2012.

The chart illustrates about the changes in three different of cases in Manchester city centre between 2003 to 2012. xOm1g

The chart illustrates about the changes in three different of cases in Manchester city centre between 2003 to 2012. Overall, Burglary in Manchester city centre has decreased significantly in a decade. Meanwhile, Car Theft was increased gradually. In 2004 the issue of Bulglary in Manchester city centre was the higher rather than other crime, in around 4000 cases but it was hit a low of 1000 in 2008. After that, the cases bounced back slightly with approximately 1000 cases in 2012. On the other hand, car theft cases in Manchester city center stood in around 500 cases in 2003, and it was fluctuated in 2008 around 2000. But it increased gradually hovering in 2800 in 2012. Apart from that there is the robery issue which is remain steady with approximately 500 cases in the end of the data.

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 of cases in Manchester city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
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between 2003 to 2012
.

Overall
, Burglary in Manchester city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 has decreased significantly
 in a decade. Meanwhile, Car Theft was increased
gradually
.

In 2004 the issue of Possible spelling mistake found.Burglary
Bulglary
 in Manchester city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 was the higher rather
 than other crime, in around 4000 cases This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it was hit
 a low of 1000 in 2008. After that, the cases bounced back slightly
 with approximately 1000 cases in 2012.

On the other hand
, car theft cases in Manchester city center stood in around 500 cases in 2003, and it was fluctuated
 in 2008 around 2000. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 it increased gradually
 hovering in 2800 in 2012. Apart from that there is the Possible spelling mistake found.Robertrobbery
robery
 issue which is Consider using a past participle here: "remained".remained
remain
 steady with approximately 500 cases in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the data. 