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The graph below shows the percentage of urban /suburban and rural household in a European country that had internet access between 1999 and 2004.

The graph below shows the percentage of urban /suburban and rural household in a European country that had internet access between 1999 and 2004. aN7d
The bar graph illustrates the information about the the proportion of urban and rural households internet access in a European country from 1999 and 2004. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Overall, it is clear that the ratio of urban households was increased in given year, whereas the proportion of rural household was lower as compared to suburban dwellers. It is evident from the bar graph that in 1999, the access of network connection was negligible in rural household, while around 15% household were registered in urban/suburban areas. Apart from this, there was repid increase of percenrage of accessing network in urban household, which was approximately 30% and there was 3% increase I rural household. Futhermore, the proportion of suburban/urban household in 2002, 2003 was almost similar with each other. While, the ratio of rural household was almost 15% and above 20% respectively. Moreover, in 2004, the proportion of urban and rural household was higheras comapred to others, that was around 55percent and nearly 35% respectively.
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internet access in a European country
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was lower
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compared to suburban dwellers.

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, while around 15%
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were registered
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of accessing network in
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, which was approximately 30% and there was 3% increase I
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household.

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, the
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in 2002, 2003 was almost similar with each other. While, the ratio of
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rural
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household
was almost 15% and above 20%
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage of urban /suburban and rural household in a European country that had internet access between 1999 and 2004.

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