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The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. kVLd
The diagram shows information about the upcoming project of Garlsdon’s town which is a supermarket. The illustration reveals two viable slots for where it can stand. Overall, one can conclude that the first possible spot for a supermarket will be positioned between a railway and a main road. It is also clear that the second feasible site is in the middle of the town’s industry and housing area. For the first post, one can see that it will be place in northwest side of the town. Furthermore, it will be closely stationed in the city of Hindon, which is 12 kilometers away and has a population of 10, 000. This section is within a railway, main roads, and an industry. Moreover, the second workable location is going to occupy the midway of an industry and a housing portion, whereas it will be almost on the south part of the map. It is also evident that this sector will be based in between of two different cities. The city of Bransdon is located on the southwest piece portion, 16 kilometers far from the industry, and has a population of 15, 000. The other city is Cransdon which is 25 kilometers away having the greatest number of populations in town with 29, 000 people.
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Garlsdon
’s
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which is a supermarket. The illustration reveals two viable slots for where it can stand.

Overall
, one can conclude that the
first
possible spot for a supermarket will
be positioned
between a railway and a main road. It is
also
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clear
that the second feasible site is in the middle of the
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town’s
industry and housing area.

For the
first
post, one can
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that it will be place in northwest side of the
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town
.
Furthermore
, it will be
closely
stationed in the city of
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Hindon
, which is 12 kilometers away and has a population of 10, 000. This section is within a railway, main roads, and an industry.

Moreover
, the second
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workable
location is going to occupy the midway of an industry and a housing portion, whereas it will be almost on the south part of the map. It is
also
evident that this sector will
be based
in between of two
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different
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cities
. The city of
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Bransdon
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on the southwest piece portion, 16 kilometers far from the industry, and has a population of 15, 000. The other city is
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Cransdon
which is 25 kilometers away having the greatest number of populations in
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town
with 29, 000
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people
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IELTS academic The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

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