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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart illustrates the percentage of unemployment in rural and urban areas within the first, second, third and fourth quaters of the year 2012. Overall, one can observe from the chart that the unemployement rate in both areas was not stable as it experienced a fluctation throughout the years, also, one could tell the rural areas had the highest unemployment rate. In the case of rural areas, the highest rate of unemployment was in the first quater peaking at over 6 percentage which later dropped to just under 5 per cent in the second quater, moreover, it fluctuated a bit in the third quater and settled at 5% in the foruth quater. The Urban areas had the least rate of unemployment in both the first and third quater, although there was an increase in the second quater which then dropped, afterwards expereincing an increase in the fourth quater to almost 5%.
The line chart illustrates the percentage of
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unemployment
in rural and urban
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areas
within the
first
, second, third and fourth
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quaters
of the year 2012.

Overall
, one can observe from the chart that the
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unemployement
rate in both
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areas
was not stable as it experienced a
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fluctation
throughout the years,
also
, one could
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the rural
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had the highest
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unemployment
rate.

In the case of rural
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areas
, the highest rate of
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was in the
first
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quater
peaking at over 6 percentage which later dropped to
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under 5 per cent in the second
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quater
,
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, it fluctuated a bit in the third
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quater
and settled at 5% in the
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foruth
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quater
.

The Urban
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had the least rate of
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in both the
first
and third
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quater
, although there was an increase in the second
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which then dropped, afterwards
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an increase in the fourth
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to almost 5%.

IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

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