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The process shows the how ethanol fuel is made by corn

The process shows the how ethanol fuel is made by corn BOWj

The represented process chart delineates the information of how ethanol fuel is made by corn. A cursory glance at the chart denotes that the corns are collected in the first step then collected corn are stored in the one container. In the next step, which corn are under storing that are sent for milling after this, cones are cooked for 4 hours but before cooking water is also mixed in corns. It is adequent enough to see that cooked corn is sent for fermenting where corn is kept for 2 days. After fermenting, corn is separated then it is divided into two parts which are liquid form is sent for purifying ethanol for maximum 5 hours and in the last stage it is stored before transporting. Overall, the most striking feature of the chart shows that it is very easy and simple process of producing ethanol fuel from corn.

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