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The graph below shows the percentage of tourists visit Brighton attractions from 1980 to 2010.

The graph below shows the percentage of tourists visit Brighton attractions from 1980 to 2010. JwLj6
Nova purnama, [22. 10. 21 09: 33] The line graph gives information percentage of tourists to UK who visited Brighton attractions such as Art Gallery, Pavilion and Pier and Festival between 1980 and 2010. Overall, the percentage of tourists to Art Gallery and Festival showed a decrease gradually since 1980 until 2010, while Pavilion and Pier showed a gradual increased throughout a period given. However, it followed by Pavillion was at the highest, compered by Art Gallery was at the lowest over the timefreme given. To begin, in 1980, the percentage of tourists to Art Gallery showed a gradual increased from 22% to 37% in 1985, and experienced a decline until the end of the period of about 8% in 2010, while the percentage to Pavillion stood at 24% and it increased gradual to approximately 31% in 2010, being the highest throughout the period given. The tourists percentage in 1980 of Pier experienced a gradual increase from 10% to 22% in 2010. In contrast, the persentage of Festival by UK decresed slowly during the period given from 30% to approximately 28% in 2010. However, Festival to be under Pavillion the end of the period given.
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to UK who visited Brighton attractions such as
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Art
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Gallery
, Pavilion and Pier and
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Festival
between 1980 and 2010.

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Art
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since 1980 until 2010, while Pavilion and Pier
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was at the highest,
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was at the lowest over the
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increased from 22% to 37% in 1985, and experienced a decline until the
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of about 8% in 2010, while the
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stood at 24% and it increased
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to approximately 31% in 2010, being the highest throughout the
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in 1980 of Pier experienced a
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increase from 10% to 22% in 2010.
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by UK
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from 30% to approximately 28% in 2010.
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