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The given graph indicates the information about how many students were at school in diverse nations from 2000 to 2007.

The given graph indicates the information about how many students were at school in diverse nations from 2000 to 2007. 8dQpV
The given graph indicates the information about how many students were at school in diverse nations from 2000 to 2007. Overall, in 2007, the proportion of Poland and Finland was higher than other countries, while that of Spain was the lowest. As can be seen in the bar chart, students in Poland, the highest proportion in 2000, kept steady at 70% during the period from 2000 to 2007. when the proportion of Norway students slightly decreased from 66% to 65%. In addition a more obvious decline from 46% to 41% was witness for students at school in Spain. However, the proportion in UK experienced a different trend, noticeable increasingly from 46% to 54% during the questioned period, during which there was a more dramatic growth by 14% seen in both Italy and Poland, booming from 38% to 52% and 64% to 78% respectively.
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were at school in diverse nations from 2000 to 2007.

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, in 2007, the
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of Poland and Finland was higher than other countries, while that of Spain was the lowest.

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in the bar chart,
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in Poland, the highest
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in 2000,
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steady at 70% during the period from 2000 to 2007.
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proportion
of Norway
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students
slightly
decreased from 66% to 65%. In
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a more obvious decline from 46% to 41% was witness for
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at school in Spain.

However
, the
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in UK experienced a
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trend, noticeable
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from 46% to 54% during the questioned period, during which there was a more dramatic growth by 14%
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in both Italy and Poland, booming from 38% to 52% and 64% to 78%
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IELTS academic The given graph indicates the information about how many students were at school in diverse nations from 2000 to 2007.

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