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The graph below shows the percentage of primary and secondary schools with Internet access in New Zealand from 1991 to 1999 and the percentage of households with internet access in 1991 and 1999.

The graph below shows the percentage of primary and secondary schools with Internet access in New Zealand from 1991 to 1999 and the percentage of households with internet access in 1991 and 1999. 0w2B5
The below graph illustrated the proportion of primary or secondary institutes and the number of households with tickets to the internet in New Zealand from 1991 to 1999. To begin with, in 1991 major and minor schools had access to the internet was a tiny fraction. In the next year, there was again in the primary was a tiny but in lesser was boosted up for using of the network. However, there was a drastically go up every year and more and more schools have access to the internet. Nevertheless, the last three years of proportion was an accumulation more than every period at 100 ratios. Similarly, in 1991 just over forty quarter of families have no permit of interest. Consequently, on in tweel have it. And in 1999 amount of users boosted up to almost third and without ticket folk decline at least a near quarter. By and large, primary and secondary academies have access to the internet had expanded every period and households with internet ratio changed in both years.
The below graph illustrated the proportion of primary or secondary institutes and the number of households with tickets to the internet in New Zealand from 1991 to 1999.

To
begin
with, in 1991 major and minor schools had access to the internet was a tiny fraction. In the
next
year
, there was again in the primary was a tiny
but
in lesser
was boosted
up for using of the network.
However
, there was a
drastically go
up every
year
and more and more schools have access to the internet.
Nevertheless
, the last three years of proportion was an accumulation more than every period at 100 ratios.

Similarly
, in 1991
just
over forty quarter of families have no permit of interest.
Consequently
, on in
tweel
have it. And in 1999 amount of users boosted up to almost third and without ticket folk decline at least a near quarter.

By and large, primary and secondary academies have access to the internet had expanded every period and households with internet ratio
changed
in both years.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage of primary and secondary schools with Internet access in New Zealand from 1991 to 1999 and the percentage of households with internet access in 1991 and 1999.

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