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The diagram illustrates that how Australian city gathered rainwater in order to make it drinkable. Overall, rainwater collected from the roofs through gutter pipe, after being filtered and then treated with some chemical in order to make it pure.

The diagram illustrates that how Australian city gathered rainwater in order to make it drinkable. Overall, rainwater collected from the roofs through gutter pipe, after being filtered and then treated with some chemical in order to make it pure. 7Pk83
The diagram illustrates that how Australian city gathered rainwater in order to make it drinkable. Overall, rainwater collected from the roofs through gutter pipe, after being filtered and then treated with some chemical in order to make it pure. Initially, rainwater which has included some impurities collected by gutter pipe from the side of individual home terrace are connected with water filter. After filteration process gets done, water will store at srorage section, while at the same the one pipe in conneced the an another tank, which is for treatment of water. At this stage of process, the water is treated with some chemical. When the water treatment tank reached at the top level, a pump help to lead to yhe upper direct tom the homes When the water is ready for drinking, it goes back to the individual house the the pipe where eveyone can consume the water at daily bases.
The diagram illustrates that how Australian city gathered rainwater in order to
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make
it drinkable.
Overall
, rainwater collected from the roofs through gutter
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pipe
, after
being filtered
and then treated with
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some
chemical in order to
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make
it pure.

Initially
, rainwater which has included
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some
impurities collected by gutter
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pipe
from the side of individual home terrace
are connected
with
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water
filter. After
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filteration
process
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gets
done,
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will store at
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srorage
section, while at the same the one
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in
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conneced
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an another tank
, which is for treatment of
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water
. At this stage of process, the
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water
is treated
with
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some
chemical. When the
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water
treatment tank reached at the
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top level
, a pump
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help
to lead to
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yhe
upper direct tom the
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homes


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water
is ready for drinking, it goes back to the individual
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house
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the the
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pipe
where
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eveyone
can consume the
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water
at daily bases.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates that how Australian city gathered rainwater in order to make it drinkable. Overall, rainwater collected from the roofs through gutter pipe, after being filtered and then treated with some chemical in order to make it pure.

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