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The table shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The table shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. dxRP
The given bar chart illustrates the number of people under custody in five different countries namely Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, United States, and Canada from 1930 to 1980. Overall, in United States significant number of people were under captivity in the year 1970 which was close to 140 thousand, whilst in Great Britain 30 thousand people were imprisoned during 1930 and 1940. Also, approximately 75 thousand people in Great Britain, Australia, and New Zealand were under custody in the year 1970. Initially, in 1930 and 1940 the Great Britain had less number of detention compared to next 5 decades. In Australia, the graph of imprisonment was fluctuating between 1930 and 1980. The number of people in prison were highest in New Zealand compared to Australia within all five decades. Canada had the greatest number of crimes in the years 1930, 1950, and 1980 than rest four countries, whereas United States had the most number of detention in the years 1940, 1960 and 1970. In conclusion, the graph of imprisonment in United States and Great Britain got worse. On the other hand, the number of arrest declined since 1930 to 1980 for Australia, New Zealand, and Canada.
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1970 which was close to 140 thousand, whilst in
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Britain 30 thousand
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, approximately 75 thousand
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Zealand were under custody in the
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1970.
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5 decades. In Australia, the graph of imprisonment was fluctuating between 1930 and 1980. The
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Zealand compared to Australia within all five decades. Canada had the greatest
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of crimes in the years 1930, 1950, and 1980 than rest four countries, whereas
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United
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had the most
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of detention in the years 1940, 1960 and 1970.
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of arrest declined since 1930 to 1980 for Australia,
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IELTS academic The table shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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