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The graph below shows the numbers of overseas visitors who went to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.

The illustrated graph compares statistics of 3 various landscapes chosed by travellers in European country, over the period from 1987 to 2007. Being dominant in 1987 accounting for 40 thousands, the quantity of coast visitors were twice more than that of mountain and quadruple more than that of lake. In the end of period overtaking other travel destinations, the proportion of coast travellers reached peak accounting for around 75%. On the other hand, lake visitors increased significantly till 2002, reached its highest point, following this, it experienced a sharp decline accounting for 50 thousands. Being second popular destination, mountains lost its reputation after 1992. fluctuating amount of mountain visitors reached its summit in 2007 accounting for roughly 35%, although it was still the least preferred landscape to visit. Finally, what stands out from the graph is that, the number of visitors who prefer to travel to the coast were prevalent for a long time except 2002, while the mountain and lake destinations experienced fluctuation during the given period.
The illustrated graph compares statistics of 3 various landscapes chosed by travellers in European country, over the period from 1987 to 2007.

Being dominant in 1987
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for 40 thousands, the quantity of coast
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visitors
were twice more than that of
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mountain
and quadruple more than that of lake. In the
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end
of period overtaking other travel destinations, the proportion of coast travellers reached peak
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accounting
for around 75%.

On the other hand
, lake
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visitors
increased
significantly
till 2002, reached its highest point, following this, it experienced a sharp decline
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accounting
for 50 thousands.

Being second popular destination,
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mountains
lost its reputation after 1992. fluctuating amount of
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mountain
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visitors
reached its summit in 2007
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accounting
for roughly 35%, although it was
still
the least preferred landscape to visit.

Finally
, what stands out from the graph is that, the number of
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visitors
who prefer to travel to the coast were prevalent for a long time except 2002, while the
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mountain
and lake destinations experienced fluctuation during the
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given
period.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the numbers of overseas visitors who went to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.

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