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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The bar chart illustrates the income of a conducted pull regarding residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and drinking in five different cities in Australia. Overall, apart from Adelaide that the most people purchased instant coffee in last 4 weeks, social members living in four other cities were by far willing to go out in order to drink a coffee and tea in the same period. According to the chart, In Melbourne, just under 65% of citizens tended to go to café to buy coffee and tea, including the highest percentage among other cities, whereas this figure in Sydney, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart was roughly 60%, 55%, 50%, and 63%, respectively. Concerning the proportion of city dwellers who bought instant coffee in 4 last weeks, Hobart accounted for the highest percentage of people buying it, while in Brisbane was almost 53% and in others, these figures were lower that 50%. With regarding to residents purchasing fresh coffee in the same period, about 45% people living in Sydney and 43% of citizens residing in Melbourne liked to buy fresh coffee. However, three others had lower tendency to consume it.
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, whereas this figure in Sydney, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart was roughly 60%, 55%, 50%, and 63%,
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in 4 last weeks, Hobart accounted for the highest percentage of
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buying it, while in Brisbane was almost 53% and in others, these figures were lower that 50%. With regarding to residents purchasing fresh
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in the same period, about 45%
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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