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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. XX28
This chart line depicts how many people graduate from universities in the period from 1992 to 2007. It is clear from graph that females are always higher than males. According to what is shown, men start in 1992 with 70K, and then rise in 1994 to 75K and still like until 1998 when it dropped to 70K again. After that it rise to 75K in 2000 and 80K in 2002. Furthermore, it grow to 85K in 2004 and plus 10K in 2007 to be 95K. Also, women begin with 100K in 1992 and a small rise by 5K in 1994. But it dropped again to 100K and still on the same status untill 2002 when rise to 110K. After this date it going to growing rapidly to 125 in 2004 and nearly 150K in 2007. To sum up we could say that it was unstable before 2000 and after this year it start to growing fast. And in the end it become 95K for men and 150K for women in 2007. Moreover, it seems to be that females growing faster than males.
This chart line depicts how
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graduate from universities in the period from 1992 to 2007. It is
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from graph that females are always higher than males.

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,
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men
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in 1992 with 70K, and then
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in 1994 to 75K and
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like until 1998 when it dropped to 70K again. After that it
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to 75K in 2000 and 80K in 2002.
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, it
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to 85K in 2004 and plus 10K in 2007 to be 95K.

Also
, women
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begin
with 100K in 1992 and a
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small
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by 5K in 1994.
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it dropped again to 100K and
still
on the same status
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untill
2002 when
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to 110K. After this date
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to growing
rapidly
to 125 in 2004 and
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150K in 2007.

To sum up we could say that it was unstable
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2000 and after this year it
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start
to growing
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. And in the
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it
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95K for
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men
and 150K for women in 2007.
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, it seems to be that females growing faster than males.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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