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The graph show the budget revenue of the financial year 2009.

The graph show the budget revenue of the financial year 2009. xA9y
The pie chart illustrate the budget revenue in the millions and also show the difference between fiscal year to financial year 2008 to 2009. There were two type of income was shown. Firstly, the endowment income which was the highly income to the budget revenue and also 11. 1 percent increased in these year from 2008. Secondly, the other income in that included rent, fees, royalties all were decreased 9. 9 percent from 2008. While the auxiliaries in that call types of food service, housing and press were slightly down 2 percent from 2008. In addition, there were two contracts were includingly. One was the private grants und contract budgeted as $43. 9 millions although grown 10. 9 percent from 2008. Second was the government grants and contacts budgeted $73. 1 millions even though shrinkly 10. 6 percent from 2008. when development gifts were increasingly 17. 1 percent to the last year 2008. Overall, some were the accrue in the endowment income, private grants and contracts and also development gifts whereas the auxiliaries, other income and government grants and contracts were loss.
The pie chart illustrate the budget revenue in the millions and
also
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show
the difference between fiscal
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year
to financial
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year
2008 to 2009.

There were two type of
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income
was shown
.
Firstly
, the endowment
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income
which was the
highly
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income
to the budget revenue and
also
11. 1
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percent
increased in these
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year
from 2008.
Secondly
, the other
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income
in that included rent, fees, royalties all
were decreased
9. 9
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percent
from 2008. While the auxiliaries in that call types of food service, housing and press were
slightly
down 2
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percent
from 2008.

In addition
, there were two
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contracts
were
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includingly
. One was the private
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grants
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und
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contract
budgeted as $43. 9 millions although grown 10. 9
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percent
from 2008. Second was the
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government
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grants
and contacts budgeted $73. 1 millions
even though
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shrinkly
10. 6
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percent
from 2008.
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when
development gifts were
increasingly
17. 1
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percent
to the last
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year
2008.

Overall
,
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some
were
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the accrue
in the endowment
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income
, private
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grants
and
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contracts
and
also
development gifts whereas the auxiliaries, other
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income
and
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government
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grants
and
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contracts
were loss.
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IELTS academic The graph show the budget revenue of the financial year 2009.

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