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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The line graph depicts, various university graduates during 1992 to 2007 in Canada. the purple line shows the number of females and the blue lines shows the number of males graduating in different years. In 1992 exactly 70, 000 males graduated whereas the number of females was higher approximately 100, 000. Followed by, in 1990s which is 1994, 1996 and 1998 the number of men graduates was less than female graduates which was between 70, 000 to 80, 000. On the contrary, the girls graduates were exactly 100, 000 and a little more. In 21st centurary, the number of male graduates was a little curvy initially but later took a steady slope. on the other hand female graduates increased initially itself. From 2000 to 2004 the number of boy graduates were between 70, 000 to 90, 000. On the other hand, women were between 100, 000 to 140, 000. Therefore, throughout the number of women graduates were more than men graduates. The maximum number of graduates for men was more than 90, 000 in 2006 and for women it was almost 150, 000.

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graduates
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graduates
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 itself. From 2000 to 2004 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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men
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graduates
. The maximum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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 was more than 90, 000 in 2006 and for women it was almost 150, 000. 