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The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant. Write at least 150 words. 

The provided line graph depicts about the numbers of travelers visiting to an island in the Caribbean from 2010 to 2017. The total comers increased and the trends remained constant in terms of both guests located on cruise and located on island. Total number of viators was 1 million in 2010 and the number was increased by approximately 2. 75 millions by the year 2015. In 2016 there was a leveled off situation and the number of walkers boomed by 3. 5 millions in 2017. Tourist staying on island was 750 thousands in 2010 and then, incurred a stabilized situation in 2011. There was an upward trends shown by the following two years upto 2013 and reached at 1. 5 millions. From 2013 to 2015 the situation remained constant and slightly decreased shown in the figure in 2016 at approximately 1. 25 millions. The number of holidaymakers again increased and finished at 1. 5 millions in 2017. Rangers on cruise started at 250 thousands in 2010 after fluctuating the numbers increased gradually to reach approximately 1. 3 millions by2015. Then, the numbers shot up by 2 millions upto 2017.
The provided line graph depicts about the
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of travelers visiting to an island in the Caribbean from 2010 to 2017. The total comers
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increased
and the trends remained constant in terms of both guests located on cruise and located on island.

Total
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number
of
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viators
was 1
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million
in 2010 and the
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number
was
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increased
by approximately 2. 75
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millions
by the year 2015. In 2016 there was a leveled off situation and the
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number
of walkers boomed by 3. 5
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millions
in 2017. Tourist staying on island was 750 thousands in 2010 and then, incurred a stabilized situation in 2011. There was an upward trends shown by the following two years
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upto
2013 and reached at 1. 5
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millions
. From 2013 to 2015 the situation remained constant and
slightly
decreased shown in the figure in 2016 at approximately 1. 25
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millions
. The
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number
of holidaymakers again
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increased
and finished at 1. 5
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millions
in 2017. Rangers on cruise
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at 250 thousands in 2010 after fluctuating the
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increased
gradually
to reach approximately 1. 3
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millions
by2015. Then, the
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shot up by 2
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upto
2017.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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