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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compared the user experience survey from 100 participants in the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and 2010. At a glance, the delivered services were increased as the percentage of guests choosing excellent surged and the dissatisfied people dipped. To begin with, in 2005, only 5% participants chose excellent, while, in 2010, more than a quarter were excellently satisfied with the customer service. In contrast, people who thought that the service was poor in 2005 accounted for 15%. However, Parkway Hotel could handle and minimized it to 4%. In addition, this progress also proved by the decreasing number of poor customer service from 21% to 12% in 2010 and 2005 respectively. The people choosing good were also rose drammatically by 15% creating the biggest proportion in 2010 with 39%. FInally, people who averagely satisfied were plunged from 21% to 12%. As a conclusion, overall the customer service level was climbed up as the largest proportion changed in 2005 and 2010 from moderately satisfied to good.
The pie charts compared the user experience survey from 100 participants in the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and 2010. At a glance, the delivered
services
were increased
as the percentage of guests choosing excellent surged and the dissatisfied
people
dipped.

To
begin
with, in 2005,
only
5% participants chose excellent, while, in 2010, more than a quarter were
excellently
satisfied with the customer
service
.
In contrast
,
people
who
thought
that the
service
was poor in 2005 accounted for 15%.
However
, Parkway Hotel could handle and minimized it to 4%.
In addition
, this progress
also
proved by the decreasing number of poor customer
service
from 21% to 12% in 2010 and 2005
respectively
. The
people
choosing
good
were
also
rose
drammatically
by 15% creating the biggest proportion in 2010 with 39%.
FInally
,
people
who
averagely
satisfied
were plunged
from 21% to 12%.

As a conclusion,
overall
the customer
service
level
was climbed
up as the largest proportion
changed
in 2005 and 2010 from
moderately
satisfied to
good
.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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