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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

The two maps depict a comparison of some changes to the Grange Park from the opening in 1920 to today. In general, as it is revealed in the pictures, the Grange Park has significantly renovated and there are some new facilities has been constructed for the public, such as theatre, café, playground, and parking area. To commence with, looking at the first picture, the park was opened for visitors in 1920 and it had several entertainment facilities since it was first built. First, there were two main entrance in Eldon Street and Arnold Avenue. Then, there was a fountain in the middle of the park and a stage for musicians on the western side. Furthermore, there were two rose gardens on the northeast and another one on the southwest. In addition, we can found a glasshouse to the east of the south entrance and one pond for water plants to the east of the north entrance. Lastly, there were five-seat areas in the park. On the other hand, as can be seen in the second picture, the rose gardens of the northeast and the southwest are relocated into the center of the park, except for the northwest rose garden. Then, there were four seats around the rose garden in the middle of the park. Moreover, there was one theatre for the concert, one playing field for children and one water feature has been developed in the park as major changes. Finally, the two main entrances remained the same, and one parking zone has been built on the eastern side of the Eldon Street Entrance.

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.

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, as it is revealed
 in the pictures, the Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 has significantly
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some
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, café, playground, and parking area.

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park
was opened
 for visitors in Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).1920, and
1920 and
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entrance
 in Eldon Street and Arnold Avenue. Then, there was a fountain in the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and a stage for musicians on the western side. Furthermore
, there were two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
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gardens
 on the northeast and another one on the southwest. In addition
, we can The verb ‘found’ is both the base form of a verb and the past tense of a different verb. Make sure that ‘found’ is correct.
found
 a glasshouse to the east of the south You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 and one pond for water plants to the east of the north You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
. Lastly
, there were five-seat areas in the park.

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seen
 in the second picture, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
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gardens
 of the northeast and the southwest are relocated
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park
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except for
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rose
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garden
. Then, there were four seats around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
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garden
 in the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. Moreover
, there was one Possible spelling mistake. ‘theatre’ is British English.theater
theatre
 for the concert, one playing field for children and one water feature has been developed
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 as major This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
. Finally
, the two main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrances
 remained the same, and one parking zone has been built
 on the eastern side of the Eldon Street You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
Entrance
. 