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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between the year 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between the year 2010 and 2017. JA80
The graph depicts the information regarding the number of tourists going to the Caribbean island between the year 2010 and 2017Overall, it is evident that the total number of tourists was rose considerably. The visitors who staying on cruise ships were continuously increasing in particular. Tourists who stay on the island underwent a more moderate increase over time. Having a glimpse at the illustration reveals that there were only 0. 3 million tourists on cruise ships as compared to the island of approximately 0. 7 million in the former year. Nextly, the number of visitors on the island remained relatively steady till the year 2011. Whereas, the figure for cruise ships increased after the year 2010. Visitors who resist on the island free considerably after the year 2010. While, the figure for cruise ship got substantial gains from the year 2011. There were a plateauing in the growth of tourists on the island from the year 2013 to 2015. However, the number of visitors on cruise ship increased a lot from the year 2013 to 2017. Shifting to the remaining data, a total of tourists shows a progressive trend. It starts from 1 million to approximately 2. 7 million till the year 2015. After that, it remains constant between the year 2015 and 2016. Ahead of it, the figure reached a peak of nearly 3. 5 million tourists.
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2010 and 2017Overall, it is evident that the total
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2010.
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2015. After that, it remains constant between the
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2015 and 2016. Ahead of it, the figure reached a peak of
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between the year 2010 and 2017.

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