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The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Kkjk
These maps depict the development which occurred in Stokeford village from 1930 to 2010. It is clear from the graph that the village had an increase in its residential capacity through rapid house construction. According to what is shown, the eastern part of Stokeford had developed entirely. Near the bridge, the farmland was diminished and new houses were built across an extension of the main road. Just below that, the primaryكليلد ستليلل مسق ةباتكلا 79 school was extended making it almost the double of its size in 1930. While a part of the gardens was converted to another extension of the road alongside with additional rows of residential units, the left-over was utilized for altering the large house into a larger retirement home complex. On the western area of the main road, the shops in 1930 had turned into a more residential area. While the post office remained untouched, the southern farmland was replaced with a square bordered by newly constructed housing units. To sum up, we could say that the although many changes took place in the village, the bridge and River Stoke was not changed and the other side of the river remained empty.
These maps depict the development which occurred in

Stokeford
village from 1930 to 2010. It is
clear
from the

graph that the village had an increase in its residential

capacity through rapid
house
construction.

According to what
is shown
, the eastern part of
Stokeford


had developed
entirely
. Near the bridge, the farmland
was diminished
and new
houses
were built
across an

extension of the main road.
Just
below that, the
primaryكليلد
ستليلل
مسق
ةباتكلا


79

school
was extended
making it almost the double of its

size in 1930. While a part of the gardens
was converted
to

another extension of the road alongside with additional

rows of residential units, the
left
-over
was utilized
for

altering the large
house
into a larger retirement home

complex.

On the western area of the main road, the shops in 1930

had
turned into a more residential area. While the post

office remained untouched, the southern farmland
was replaced
with a square bordered by
newly
constructed

housing units.

To sum up, we could say that the although
many
changes


took place in the village, the bridge and River Stoke was

not
changed
and the other side of the river remained

empty.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

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