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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010vand 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010vand 2017 ogqb
The line graph illustrates how many visitors traveled to a particular Caribbean island during the course of 7 years. Generally, the total number of tourists visiting the island always increased over the 7 years. Furthermore, the number of visitors staying on island was higher than those staying on cruise ships during most of the period. In 2010, the total amount of tourists traveling to the Caribbean Island was exactly 1 million, that is include 750, 000 of visitors staying on island, whereas the rest decided to stay on cruise ships. Finally, in 2017 the Caribbean island had 3. 5 million visitors. Moreover, the number of tourists who stayed on cruise experienced a sharp increase to 2 million while the number of visitors staying on island was just 1. 5 million.
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traveled to a particular Caribbean
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during the course of 7 years.
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of tourists visiting the
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always increased over the 7 years.
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was higher than those
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on cruise ships during most of the period. In 2010, the total amount of tourists traveling to the Caribbean
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was exactly 1
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, whereas the rest decided to stay on cruise ships.
Finally
, in 2017 the Caribbean
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had 3. 5
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.
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of tourists who stayed on cruise experienced a sharp increase to 2
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while the
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010vand 2017

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