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The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. BGXd

The diagram shows the product of cement production and how to produce concrete using cement for building purpose. Limestone and clay are the main equipment to create cement. On the other hand four things need for making concrete like water, sand, small stones and the last one is cement, but cement is the main ingredient. The main difference between two process is that the concrete mixer does not work with the heat. First break the limestone and clay in the crasher. Powder can be obtained after break those two things. Then mix the powder properly in the mixer. After mixing properly, heat the powder on the rotating heater. Afterwards the mixture goes into a grinder where the cement comes out. In the end of the process the cement is packed into bags. The concrete production process starts with the mixing of 15% cement and 10% water. Then add 25 % sand and 50% small stones. Afterwards mix those four things in the concrete mixer then the concrete comes out.

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 the product of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 production and how to produce concrete using You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 for building purpose.

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cement
. On the other hand
 four things need for making concrete like water, sand, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 stones and the last one is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 is the main ingredient. The main difference between two process is that the concrete mixer does not work with the heat.

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 break the limestone and clay in the Possible spelling mistake found.crashedcrashescrusherbrasherrashercrasser
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. Powder can be obtained
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 in the mixer. After mixing properly
, heat the powder on the rotating heater. Afterwards the mixture goes into a grinder where the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
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comes
 out. In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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 of the process the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
is packed
 into bags.

The concrete production process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 with the mixing of 15% You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 and 10% water. Then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 25 % sand and 50% This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 stones. Afterwards mix those four things in the concrete mixer then the concrete This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 out. 