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The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. KXX0
The diagram illustrate an overview of a domestic central heat system. It provides information about how pipes pass the water from tank to boiler and working principle of water radiators. Overall, the process flows as cycle form, once the water has been through the pipes and radiators, it is returned to the boiler and re-heated again for provide hot air for house. The cold water enter into house ant it is stored in water storage tank in the top of house. After that the water is passed throught boiler which is located down side of house. The boiler a type of device convert the fuel(oil or gas) into energy used for increase the temprature of water. Then the hot water pumped round the house through the stystem of pipes and flows. When the water reach radiators which have small tubes inside them to help the spreading of heat, it provide warms weather for room.
The diagram
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illustrate
an overview of a domestic central heat system. It provides information about how pipes pass the
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water
from tank to
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boiler
and working principle of
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water
radiators.

Overall
, the process flows as cycle form, once the
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water
has been through the pipes and radiators, it
is returned
to the
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boiler
and re-heated again for provide hot air for
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house
.

The
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cold
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water
enter into
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house
ant it
is stored
in
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water
storage tank in the top of
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house
.
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After
that the
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water
is passed
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throught
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boiler
which
is located
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down side
of
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house
. The
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boiler
a type of device convert the fuel(oil or gas) into energy
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used
for increase the
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temprature
of
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water
. Then the hot
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water
pumped round the
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house
through the
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stystem
of pipes and flows. When the
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water
reach radiators which have
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small
tubes inside them to
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help
the spreading of heat, it
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provide
warms weather for room.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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