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The table illustrates the proportion of national expenditure in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey on three categories of items in 2002.

The table illustrates the proportion of national expenditure in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey on three categories of items in 2002. Overall, all countries spent most on food, drinks and tobacco, which was almost three times that of the other items. The lowest expenditure was on leisure and education in the five countries. The expenditure of Turkey overall was higher than the other countries. In terms of food, drinks and tobacco, Turkey spent the most at 32. 14%. The expenditure of Ireland was also high (28. 91%) compared to Sweden which spent the least (15. 77%). Spain and Italy spent 18. 80% and 16. 36% respectively. Italy spent more than the other countries on clothing and footwear (9%) as opposed to the lowest expenditure which could be seen in Sweden at 5. 40%. The other three countries spent on average around 6. 5%. The lowest expenditure was on leisure and education which accounted for under5% in all countries. Turkey spent most on these items at just 4. 35% of their national expenditure which is around double that of Spain which spent the least at just 1. 98%.
The table illustrates the proportion of national
expenditure
in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey on three categories of items in 2002.
Overall
, all
countries
spent
most on food, drinks and tobacco, which was almost three times that of the
other
items. The lowest
expenditure
was on leisure and education in the five
countries
. The
expenditure
of Turkey
overall
was higher than the
other
countries
. In terms of food, drinks and tobacco, Turkey
spent
the most at 32. 14%. The
expenditure
of Ireland was
also
high (28. 91%) compared to Sweden which
spent
the least (15. 77%). Spain and Italy
spent
18. 80% and 16. 36%
respectively
. Italy
spent
more than the
other
countries
on clothing and footwear (9%) as opposed to the lowest
expenditure
which could be
seen
in Sweden at 5. 40%. The
other
three
countries
spent
on average around 6. 5%. The lowest
expenditure
was on leisure and education which accounted for under5% in all
countries
. Turkey
spent
most on these items at
just
4. 35% of their national
expenditure
which is around double that of Spain which
spent
the least at
just
1. 98%.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the proportion of national expenditure in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey on three categories of items in 2002.

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