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The table shows results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city Units are measured in percentage

The table illustrates the proportion of two experiments done in 1980 and 2010 on numerous types of aspects of a particular city. Looking from the overall perspective, it is evident that education and employment are the only aspects that improved by 2010. However, the aspects such as health care, environment, shops and transports were better in 1980 than 2010. In 1980, healthcare was the best aspect which had 82% of good comments on the other hand, by 2010, there was only 74%of decent comments for the healthcare sector. By 2010, 82% of positive comments produced by education aspect which was the best area than the other particular areas. People gave negative comments mostly for transport in both years at around 52% in 1980 and 39% by 2010. Environment had 6% of bad comments and 72% positive comments but by 2010 the bad comments climbed up to 16% and positive approximately remained the same. Shops got same neither good nor bad results (24%) in both years though, by 2010 the positive comments decreased up to 60%. Employment aspect approximately rose by 10% at good and bad comments by 2010.
The table illustrates the proportion of two experiments done in 1980 and 2010 on numerous types of
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of a particular city.

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perspective, it is evident that education and employment are the
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aspects
that
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improved
by 2010.
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, the
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such as health care, environment, shops and transports were better in 1980 than 2010.

In 1980, healthcare was the best
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aspect
which had 82% of
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good
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comments
on the other hand
, by 2010, there was
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only
74%of decent
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comments
for the healthcare sector. By 2010, 82% of
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positive
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comments
produced by education
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aspect
which was the best area than the other particular areas.
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People
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negative
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for transport in both years at around 52% in 1980 and 39% by 2010. Environment had 6% of
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bad
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comments
and 72%
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positive
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comments
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by 2010 the
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bad
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climbed up to 16% and
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positive
approximately remained the same. Shops
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same neither
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nor
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results (24%) in both years though, by 2010 the
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positive
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comments
decreased up to 60%. Employment
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aspect
approximately rose by 10% at
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good
and
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bad
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comments
by 2010.

IELTS academic The table shows results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city Units are measured in percentage

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