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The line graph provides details on the average CO2 emissions per capita over a 40-year period between 1967 and 2007 in four European countries.

The line graph provides details on the average CO2 emissions per capita over a 40-year period between 1967 and 2007 in four European countries. Overall, two countries (Italy and Portugal) witnessed an increase in the average CO2 emissions while the per capita figures in the other two countries declined. Italy and Portugal both experienced a gradual increase in CO2 emissions per person, both increasing at a similar rate. Italy started in 1967 at around 4 metric tonnes per person while Portugal was much lower at 1 metric tonne. By the end of the period, Italy’s emissions had risen to just under 8 metric tonnes and Portugal’s had increased to just below 6 metric tonnes. In contrast, the UK started as the highest producer of CO2 per per person in 1967 with over 10 metric tonnes. This figure fell to just over 8 metric tonnes but remained the country with the highest figure in 2007. Sweden’s emissions started high at over 8 metric tonnes and increased slightly in 1977. After this point, however, the figure declined significantly, finishing at the same level as Portugal in 2007, just under 6 tonnes — the joint lowest figure of all four countries. IELTS DAILY – The best place to practice your IELTS every day https: //facebook. com/ieltsdailycourse
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on the average CO2
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per capita
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a 40-year

period between 1967 and 2007 in four European countries.

Overall
, two countries (Italy and Portugal) witnessed an increase in the average CO2 emissions

while the per capita
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in the other two countries declined.

Italy and Portugal both experienced a gradual increase in CO2
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per person, both

increasing at a similar rate. Italy
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in 1967 at around 4 metric tonnes per person while

Portugal was much lower at 1 metric tonne. By the
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of the period, Italy’s
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had risen

to
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under 8 metric tonnes and Portugal’s had increased to
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below 6 metric tonnes.

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, the UK
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as the highest producer of CO2 per per person in 1967 with
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10

metric tonnes. This
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fell to
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8 metric tonnes
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remained the country with the

highest
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figure
in 2007. Sweden’s
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emissions
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high at
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8 metric tonnes and increased

slightly
in 1977. After this point,
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declined
significantly
, finishing at the same

level as Portugal in 2007,
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under 6 tonnes — the joint lowest
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of all four countries.

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