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the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 bYY06

The line graphs illustrates the percentages of travelers to traveling a certain caribean islan from 2010 to 2017. Firstly, in 2010 there were a quarter of million visitors staying on cruise ships. From 2010 to 2011, the visitors staying on cruise ships increased slightly and reached 0. 5 million units. From 2011 to 2012, there was a slow decrease in visitors staying on cruise ships. Over the next five years it grow gradually and 2017 it reacher its peack 2000000 units. Secondly, in 2010, there were 7, 50, 000 visitors staying on island. Between 2010 to 2011 there was no change visitors stying on island and remained same as 2010. From 2011 to 2013 the visitors stying on island rose moderatly and reached its peak 1500000 units.

The line graphs illustrates the percentages of travelers to traveling a certain Possible spelling mistake found.Caribbean
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 from 2010 to 2017. Firstly
, in 2010 there were a quarter of million You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
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staying
 on cruise ships. From 2010 to 2011, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresidesettlelastlingerhangstop
staying
 on cruise ships increased slightly
 and reached 0. 5 million units. From 2011 to 2012, there was a slow decrease in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresidesettlelastlingerhangstop
staying
 on cruise ships. Over the next
 five years it Did you mean "grows"?grows
grow
gradually
 and 2017 Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'it'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
it reacher
 its Possible spelling mistake found.peacepeakPeacepackPeckpeach
peack
 2000000 units. Secondly
, in 2010, there were 7, 50, 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresidesettlelastlingerhangstop
staying
 on island. Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "Between 2010 and 2011".Between 2010 and 2011
Between 2010 to 2011
 there was no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
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stying
 on island and remained same as 2010. From 2011 to 2013 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
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stying
 on island rose Possible spelling mistake found.moderately
moderatly
 and reached its peak 1500000 units. 