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the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 bYY06
The line graphs illustrates the percentages of travelers to traveling a certain caribean islan from 2010 to 2017. Firstly, in 2010 there were a quarter of million visitors staying on cruise ships. From 2010 to 2011, the visitors staying on cruise ships increased slightly and reached 0. 5 million units. From 2011 to 2012, there was a slow decrease in visitors staying on cruise ships. Over the next five years it grow gradually and 2017 it reacher its peack 2000000 units. Secondly, in 2010, there were 7, 50, 000 visitors staying on island. Between 2010 to 2011 there was no change visitors stying on island and remained same as 2010. From 2011 to 2013 the visitors stying on island rose moderatly and reached its peak 1500000 units.
The line graphs illustrates the percentages of travelers to traveling a certain
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caribean
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from 2010 to 2017.
Firstly
, in 2010 there were a quarter of million
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visitors
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staying
on cruise ships. From 2010 to 2011, the
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visitors
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staying
on cruise ships increased
slightly
and reached 0. 5 million units. From 2011 to 2012, there was a slow decrease in
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visitors
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staying
on cruise ships. Over the
next
five years it
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grow
gradually
and 2017
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it reacher
its
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peack
2000000 units.
Secondly
, in 2010, there were 7, 50, 000
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visitors
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staying
on island.
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Between 2010 to 2011
there was no
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change
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visitors
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stying
on island and remained same as 2010. From 2011 to 2013 the
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visitors
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stying
on island rose
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moderatly
and reached its peak 1500000 units.
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