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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The provided chart illustrates the proportion of tourists travelling an island belongs to Caribbbean over the course of 7 seven years starting from 2010. Overall, it can be seen that there was a stable increase in the total tourists, while two other sectors had the fluctuated trend during the 7 years period, visitor staying on the cruise ships and visitors staying on island respectively. In 2010, the number of visitors in total on the cruise ships stood at 1 million then soared steadily up until 2015, the proportion had remained stable at 3 million in 2016 and reach the peak at 3, 5 million in 2017. On the other hand, the tourists using cruise ships had the lowest trend in 2010, almost 0, 3 million specifically and rose slightly to 0, 5 million then back to the 2010 number. After that decrease, the proportion of cruise ships visitor user had jumped up to 2 million in 2017. In contrast, the number of tourists staying on the island had over 0, 5 million visitors in 2010 and marginally increased to 1, 5 million and remain steady until 2015 then decrease to 1, 2 million in 2016 and finally stood at 1, 5 million in 2017 which also mean lower than the visitors using cruise ships in comparison
The provided chart illustrates the proportion of
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tourists
travelling an island belongs to
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Caribbbean
over the course of 7 seven years starting from 2010.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that there was a stable increase in the total
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tourists
, while two other sectors had the fluctuated trend during the 7 years period,
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visitor
staying on the
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cruise
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ships
and
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visitors
staying on island
respectively
.

In 2010, the number of
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visitors
in total on the
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cruise
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ships
stood at 1
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million
then soared
steadily
up until 2015, the proportion had remained stable at 3
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million
in 2016 and reach the peak at 3, 5
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million
in 2017.

On the other hand
, the
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tourists
using
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cruise
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ships
had the lowest trend in 2010, almost 0, 3
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million
specifically
and rose
slightly
to 0, 5
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million
then back to the 2010 number. After that decrease, the proportion of
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cruise
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ships
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visitor
user had jumped up to 2
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million
in 2017.
In contrast
, the number of
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tourists
staying on the island had over 0, 5
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million
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visitors
in 2010 and
marginally
increased to 1, 5
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million
and remain steady until 2015 then decrease to 1, 2
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million
in 2016 and
finally
stood at 1, 5
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million
in 2017 which
also
mean lower than the
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visitors
using
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cruise
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ships
in
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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