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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. NGpj
The chart given illustrates how many visitors visit a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. It was clear that the total number of visitors had gradually grown up through this period. The number of visitors who chose to stay on the island had increased until 2015, while the date for tourists staying on cruise ships overwhelmingly went up between 2010 and 2017. A great growth occurred in the total number of tourists, which climbed from 1 to 3. 5 million in these years. The number of visitors staying on the island grew to 1. 2 million in 2012, whereas the number of tourists visiting on cruise ships decreased to 0. 25 million. However, numbers for people staying on the island and staying on ships both saw a growth in the following years, which were 1. 5 million and 1. 2 million respectively in 2015. After that, the number of tourists staying on the island fell by 0. 3 million, but it went back to the same level as that of 2015. By contrast, the number of visitors staying on ships continued to go up, which was 2 million in 2017.
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visitors
visit a particular Caribbean
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island
from 2010 to 2017.

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that the total
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had
gradually
grown up through this period. The
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visitors
who chose to stay on the
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island
had increased until 2015, while the date for
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tourists
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staying
on cruise
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ships
overwhelmingly
went up between 2010 and 2017.

A great growth occurred in the total
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number
of
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tourists
, which climbed from 1 to 3. 5
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million
in these years. The
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number
of
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visitors
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staying
on the
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island
grew to 1. 2
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million
in 2012, whereas the
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of
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tourists
visiting on cruise
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decreased to 0. 25
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a growth in the following years, which were 1. 5
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and 1. 2
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respectively
in 2015.

After that, the
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fell by 0. 3
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,
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it went back to the same level as that of 2015. By contrast, the
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on
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continued to go up, which was 2
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million
in 2017.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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