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The line graph describes the strength of the native English speakers and overseas students who are commencing and completed their education till 2010 in Australian universities over a decade. Overall, it is clear in the line graph that the overseas students and Local students strength at Australian universities who completed and commencing their education in 2001 to 2010. In Graph one, The total count of overseas students who completed their education in 2001 was 20000, In the year 2004 the range of students who completed their education was 40000 and for every two years there was a spike of 20000 students who completed their education that is in 2007 the total count of overseas students reached to 60000 but after three years in 2010 students who completed their graduation was more than 20000 and the total count reaches more than 80000. And people who are undertaking their graduation in the year 2001 was less than 20000 and it takes five years to reach 20000. And from 2006 there is the gradual increase of spike till 2010 and reaches more than 40000 students. In Graph two, The total count of the local students who completed their education in the year 2001 was 40000 and till 2007 the gradual increase with more than 60000 students in total. And from 2007 the

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