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The pie chart shows the indexed Australian share portfolio.

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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of the indexed share portfolio for Australia. Observing the details, approximately 30. 44% of investment in materials sector; while, the second large investment was in financials sector. More than 8% of funds allotted for energy source; whereas, less than 8% for consumer staple, industrial class and for listed properties. It is surprising to note that, only 3% money out of 100% allotted for health care department. However, the lowest investment was in other sectors by 0. 06% Furthermore, around 3. 88% and 4. 87% of funding went on consumer discretionary and telecom service. To add to this, for utilities and info technology, about 1. 25% and 0. 48% amount of money allotted. Overall, in Australia share portfolio the major investment were in material sector and financial sector; whereas less funds addressed for health care service.

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of the indexed share portfolio for Australia.

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