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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 MKVk
The chart represents millions of visitors visiting a Caribbean island during 2010 to 2017. Overall, the number of tourists was increasing rapidly. Visitors staying on Cuise ships was also in growing manner but staying on island was in growth mood for sometime after that it went down. Looking at the provided detail the visitors on cruise ships was 0. 2 millions in 2010 which rose to half millions for next year while Staying on islend remained same. From 2012 to 2015, people rest on cruise ships tas wag in marketing mood uohernenai remain on island got feltelte ate from 0. 7 million to one and halo million Then for 2016 and 2017, wating on cruise ships each to two nlAlions od unfortunatly, the staying on island fara droped to 1. 3 and then move above to 15 million In addition, the toilet ypas again, its jobs foom One million which way extend to my might 2. 3 millions and in 2015 Remain tourists. for Collowing year and
The chart represents
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millions
of visitors visiting a Caribbean
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island
during 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the number of tourists was increasing
rapidly
. Visitors
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staying
on
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Cuise
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ships
was
also
in growing manner
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but
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staying
on
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island
was in growth mood for sometime after that it went down.

Looking at the provided detail the visitors on cruise
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ships
was 0. 2
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millions
in 2010 which rose to half
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millions
for
next
year while
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Staying
on
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islend
remained same. From 2012 to 2015,
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people
rest on cruise
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ships
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tas wag
in marketing mood
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uohernenai
remain on
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island
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got
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feltelte
ate from 0. 7
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million
to one and halo
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million
Then for 2016 and 2017,
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wating
on cruise
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ships
each to two
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nlAlions
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od
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unfortunatly
, the
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staying
on
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fara droped
to 1. 3 and then
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move
above to 15 million

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ypas
again, its jobs
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One
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million
which way extend to my might 2. 3
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and in 2015 Remain tourists.
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for
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

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