Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The bar chart illustrates the quantity of money in Southland in 3 different years (2000, 2021, 2025) respectively.

The bar chart illustrates the quantity of money in Southland in 3 different years (2000, 2021, 2025) respectively. xrM1
The bar chart illustrates the quantity of money in Southland in 3 different years (2000, 2021, 2025) respectively. Overall, it is clear international tourism provide much more money than other exports among the three years, however, meat products are least exports in 2000, 2021, 2025 In 2000, essential sell overseas was global tourism by 8 billion, however, in that year, farm produce was nearly 7 billion, additionally, meat products was lower than dairy products just 1 billion Furthermore, in 2021, worldwide travel slightly increases by 1 billion and reaches 9 billion, however, dairy farm products sharply rise and catch 10 billion, as a result of that, dairy commodities are the first major exports in 2021. In contrast, meat products gradually decrease, however, the minimum exports are meat products. Finally, in 2025, global tourism considerably increases by 1 billion due to the forecast. Whenever dairy products slightly reduce and catch approximately 9. 5 billion. While meat products will be decline and arrive at 5 billion
The bar chart illustrates the quantity of money in Southland in 3
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
years (2000, 2021, 2025)
respectively
.

Overall
, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
international tourism provide much more money than other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exports
among the three years,
however
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
are
A determiner is probably missing here: "the least".
least
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exports
in 2000, 2021, 2025

In 2000, essential sell overseas was global tourism by 8
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
,
however
, in that year, farm produce was
nearly
7
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
,
additionally
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
was lower than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dairy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
1 billion

Furthermore
, in 2021, worldwide travel
slightly
increases by 1
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
and reaches 9
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
,
however
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dairy
farm
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
sharply
rise and catch 10
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
,
as a result
of that,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dairy
commodities are the
first
major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exports
in 2021.
In contrast
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
gradually
decrease,
however
, the minimum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exports
are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meat
products.

Finally
, in 2025, global tourism
considerably
increases by 1
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
due to the forecast. Whenever
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dairy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
slightly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
and catch approximately 9. 5
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
. While
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
will be decline and arrive at 5
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
billion
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the quantity of money in Southland in 3 different years (2000, 2021, 2025) respectively.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The bar chart illustrates the quantity of money in Southland in 3 different years (2000, 2021, 2025) respectively.