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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. LMXp
The line graph illustrates a number of people who visited to Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Overall, it can be evidently seen that all of categories observed upward trend during these years. Total was the highest during these years. While visitors who stayed on island was the second in the initial year, ones staying on cruise overtook it in the last years. In terms of higher category, total observed upward tendency in between 2010 and 2017. it increased from 1 million to 3. 5. As for visitors staying on island, whereas it had below 0. 5 millions people in 2010, it underwent rising tendency, with 1. 5 increase. With regards to visitors staying on cruise, the number of tourists grew from 0. 7 millions to 1. 5 millions. Numbers rose sharply after 2011; however, their numbers underwent decreasing tendency between 2015 and 2016, from 1. 5 millions to 1. 2 millions. Numbers recovered previous numbers from 2016 onwards.
The line graph illustrates a
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number
of
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people
who visited
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island between 2010 and 2017.

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, it can be
evidently
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that
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all of categories
observed upward trend during these years. Total was the highest during these years. While visitors who stayed on island was the second in the initial year,
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ones
staying on cruise overtook it in the last years.

In terms of higher category, total observed upward tendency in between 2010 and 2017.
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it
increased from 1
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million
to 3. 5. As for visitors staying on island, whereas it had below 0. 5
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millions
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people
in 2010, it underwent rising tendency, with 1. 5 increase.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
With regards to
visitors staying on cruise, the
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number
of tourists grew from 0. 7
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millions
to 1. 5
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millions
.
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rose
sharply
after 2011;
however
, their
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underwent decreasing tendency between 2015 and 2016, from 1. 5
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millions
to 1. 2
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millions
.
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Numbers
recovered previous
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numbers
from 2016 onwards.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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