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cutting tools in the Stone Age

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The diagram explains the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age of 1. 4 million years ago and 0. 8 million years ago. Overall, the diagram consists of three views namely front view, side view, and the back view of the two different tools. First of all Tool A which was developed 1. 4 million years ago in Stone Age. The front view of this tool is little longer than Tool B. Side view of the tool A has sharp edge and wider length when compared to tool B. The side view has sharp edge and wider length when compared to tool B. Back view which is almost similar to the front view and has a structure like a tall mountain with the height of 5 cm. Tool B is developed 0. 8 million years ago in the Stone Age. This tool has a wider front view. It consists of tip sharp edge in front view. The side view is very thin and sharper than the Tool A. The back view is same as wider as front view but the tip of back is little blunt. It has length abouth 5cm same as Tool A.
The diagram
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explains
the development of cutting
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tools
in the Stone Age of 1. 4
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million
years ago and 0. 8
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million
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Overall
, the diagram consists of three
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views
namely
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front
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view
, side
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view
, and the
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back
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view
of the two
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different
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tools
.
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First of all
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Tool
A which
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1. 4
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million
years ago in Stone Age. The
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front
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view
of this
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tool
is
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little
longer than
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Tool
B. Side
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view
of the
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tool
A has sharp edge and
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wider
length when compared to
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tool
B. The side
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view
has sharp edge and
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wider
length when compared to
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tool
B.
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Back
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view
which is almost similar to the
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front
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view
and has a structure like a tall mountain with the height of 5 cm.
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Tool
B
is developed
0. 8
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million
years ago in the Stone Age. This
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tool
has a
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wider
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front
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view
. It consists of tip sharp edge in
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front
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view
. The side
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view
is
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very
thin and sharper than the
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Tool
A. The
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back
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view
is same as
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wider
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as
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front
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view
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but
the tip of
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blunt. It has length
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same as
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A.
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IELTS academic cutting tools in the Stone Age

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
196 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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