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The graph below shows the number of three different crimes ing England and Wales between 1970 and 2005

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The given is a line graph giving information about three different categories of crime in England and Wales for the period of 35 years starting froom 1970. The unit is given in million measurement for the diagram. Overall, it can be seen that the car theft was the most level of crime over the whole period while the diagram shows a lowest degree in street robbery. In case of line graph, car theft had the higher rates with some changes. In 1970 it possessed about 0. 4 million peopleand it had a slight increase for the period of 15 years. Apart from that it illustrate a unpredictable rate approximately 1. 6 million individuals arrested in 1995. By the end of the period it decreased slowly to 10. On the contrary, over the whole span, street robbery remained stable by the end of the period while house burglary shows a fluctuations. In 1970 accomodition burglary indicate approximately 0. 2 million people then it started to increase gradually. Most significant rate was 0. 7 in house burglary after that it went down with reach 0. 4 million individuals.
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lowest degree in street robbery. In case of line graph, car theft had the higher rates with
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individuals arrested in 1995. By the
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