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The graph below shows the number of students enrolled in two different schools.

The graph below shows the number of students enrolled in two different schools. EY9b

The line graph gives information about how many pupils enrolled in Riverside School and Litchfield School between 2011 and 2015. Overall, it is clearly seen that there was a moderate decrease in the number of students who enrolled in Riverside school, while the trend of Litchfield School experienced a gradual increase over the given period. To begin, the proportion of pupils who enrolled to Litchfield School stood at just under 1000 in 2001. Subsequently, there was a gradual increase to 1200 in the number of students who enrolled to Litchfield School. Turning to Riverside school, it began with 800 in first year of the graph. Despite increasing slowly to just over 800 in 2012, Riverside school then experienced a sharp decrease to nearly 600 in 2014. In contrast, there was a dramatic increase, rocketing to about 1500 between 2013 and 2014 in the number of pupils who enrolled to Litchfield School. (151 words).

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