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The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. wkmd
The pictures illustrate how West Park Secondary School had changed from 1950 to 2010. Firstly, the farmland was converted into a sports field in 1980 then was transformed into a car park in 2010. The car park was extended in 2010 and the sports field occupied part of the playground. Secondly, the houses disappeared in 1980 and the space was turned into car park and science block. The Science block was added beside the school main building in 1980 while both the school main building and the playground remained in the same location although the playground became smaller in 2010. Lastly, the main road remained unchanged through the years. Overall, the main changes were on the farmland and the houses which were removed from the map. Science block, car park and sports field were built and the playground was reduced in size.
The pictures illustrate how West
Park
Secondary School had
changed
from 1950 to 2010.

Firstly
, the farmland
was converted
into a sports field in 1980 then
was transformed
into a
car
park
in 2010. The
car
park
was extended
in 2010 and the sports field occupied part of the playground.

Secondly
, the
houses
disappeared in 1980 and the space
was turned
into
car
park
and science block.

The Science block was
added
beside the school
main
building in 1980 while both the school
main
building and the playground remained in the same location although the playground became smaller in 2010.

Lastly
, the
main
road remained unchanged through the years.

Overall
, the
main
changes
were on the farmland and the
houses
which
were removed
from the map. Science block,
car
park
and sports field
were built
and the playground was
reduced
in size.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

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