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The diagram shows the process of recycling of glass bottles. Overall, it can be clearly seen that process goes through various complex steps which looks tedious. Initially glass bottles are collected from individuals and separated into the three categories on the basis of its colour green brown and colourless. Second stage is transportations in which all bottles has been delivered to process plant in classification section. Why metal cap bottles put into one box plastic cabs into others. In next stage, glass has been broken via machine and materials transported to glass factory through car. In this stage, broken glasses and raw material has been furnance at a 1200 degree celsius. finally, melted mixtures get as a yeild and from that new bottles has been made.
The diagram
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the process of recycling of
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glass
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bottles
.
Overall
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clearly
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seen
that process goes through various complex steps which looks tedious.

Initially
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glass
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bottles
are collected
from individuals and separated into the three categories on the basis of its
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colour
green brown and
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colourless
. Second stage is transportations in which all
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bottles
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has
been delivered
to process plant in classification section. Why metal cap
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bottles
put into one box plastic cabs into others. In
next
stage,
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glass
has
been broken
via machine and materials transported to
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glass
factory through car. In this stage, broken glasses and raw material has been
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furnance
at a 1200 degree
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celsius
.
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finally
, melted mixtures
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get
as a
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yeild
and from that new
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bottles
has
been made
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IELTS academic The flowchart below shows the recycling process procedure of glass bottles

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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