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The table shows the amount of coal used by different sectors in the UK.

The table shows the amount of coal used by different sectors in the UK. jxnp
The given illustration shares the data of the usage of coal by four different sources in the United Kingdom. Summarizing the given information, it can be seen that, the consumption of coal by the power stations was the highest throughout the 25 years. Services sectors used the least amount of coal among all the 4 sectors in the United Kingdom from 1975 to 2000. The usage of coal by the industry sector kept decreasing throughout the 25 years from 19. 6 to 3. 2 million of tonnes. Also, in the domestic sector the consumption of coal kept decreasing from 1997 to 1985 but was constant in 1990 and 1995 and again decreased in 2000. Even in the services sector the consumption of coal decreased from 4. 2 million of tonnes in 1975 to 0. 5 million of tonnes in 1995 but increased by 0. 1 million of tonnes in 2000. Overall, the consumption of coal in the United Kingdom by various sectors gradually decreased in 25 years.
The
given
illustration shares the data of the usage of coal by four
different
sources in the United Kingdom.

Summarizing the
given
information, it can be
seen
that, the
consumption
of coal by the power stations was the highest throughout the 25 years. Services
sectors
used
the least amount of coal among all the 4
sectors
in the United Kingdom from 1975 to 2000.

The usage of coal by the industry
sector
kept
decreasing throughout the 25 years from 19. 6 to 3. 2
million
of tonnes.
Also
, in the domestic
sector
the
consumption
of coal
kept
decreasing from 1997 to 1985
but
was constant in 1990 and 1995 and again decreased in 2000. Even in the services
sector
the
consumption
of coal decreased from 4. 2
million
of tonnes in 1975 to 0. 5
million
of tonnes in 1995
but
increased by 0. 1
million
of tonnes in 2000.

Overall
, the
consumption
of coal in the United Kingdom by various
sectors
gradually
decreased in 25 years.
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