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The diagram below shows the process of canning of fish. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process below.

The diagram below shows the process of canning of fish. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process below. 0o95

The given picture illustrates the process of canning of fish. It is manifest from the graph that 15 steps are involved from the initial catching to the final dispatch to supermarkets. First, the fish are caught and then frozen and stored in the next step. Then they are unloaded and weighed before being thawed. After thawing, they are cut into big pieces and then are steam cooked. After cooking, these are cooled and then these are filleted or cut into small pieces. Then these pieces are canned. Brine, water or oil is added in the cans. In the next step the cans are sealed and then heated for sterilization. Then, stamping or labeling of the cans is done before storing them for final dispatch to supermarkets for sale. Overall, it is clear that canning of fish is a lengthy and tedious process involving many steps. Each step is very important to retain the freshness of the fish and to make it consumable for a long time.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 picture illustrates the process of canning of fish. It is manifest from the graph Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthat.that!that?that:that,that;
that


15 steps are involved
 from the initial catching to the final dispatch to supermarkets.

First
, the fish are caught
 and then frozen and stored in the next
 step. Then they are Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphunloaded.unloaded!unloaded?unloaded:unloaded,unloaded;
unloaded


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 weighed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being thawed
. After thawing, they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 pieces and then Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphare.are!are?are:are,are;
are


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSteam
steam
 cooked. After cooking, these are cooled
 and then these are filleted
 or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsmall.small!small?small:small,small;
small


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPieces
pieces
. Then these pieces are canned
. Brine, water or oil is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in the cans. In the next
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphstep.step!step?step:step,step;
step


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 cans are sealed
 and then heated for sterilization. Then, stamping or labeling of the cans is

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDone
done
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 storing them for final dispatch to supermarkets for sale.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that canning of fish is a lengthy and tedious process involving This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 steps.

Each step is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to retain the freshness of the fish and to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it consumable for a long time. 