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people eating fish and chicken consume by british people in 1979, 1989,2004

people eating fish and chicken consume by british people in 1979, 1989, 2004 KwEG0

The line graph provides the information about the citizen of British prefer to eat variety of non-vegetarian food in grams per week between the year 1979 and 2004. To commence with, There are two opposite trend between the chicken and beef eater. In the year 1979, people eat around 220 gram per week, that grows to 240 grams and remain stable for next 10 years. After 1989 there was drastic fall in beef consumer from 0. 240 kilogram to 0. 110 kilogram in 2004. Another food is chicken which shows upward trend that starts from 140 grams per week consume by an individual to 200 gram in the next decade. Preference of eating chicken food over other, take the graph to the highest and reached 0. 250 kilogram in 7 days in 2004. Additionally, love for fish and lamb foods are less in number. There was no change in consumption of fish which remain constant between 1979 to 2004 However, lamb consumed by a person in 1979 was 150 gram that reduced further to 70 grams in next 25 years. Overall, it is observed that chicken shows an upward trend whereas love for lamb and beef reducing every year and fish is always remain constant throughout the year.

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grams
 per week between the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1979 and 2004.

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trend
 between the chicken and beef eater. In the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1979, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 eat around 220 Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: "grams".grams
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 per week, that grows to 240 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grams
 and remain stable for next
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After
 1989 there was drastic fall in beef consumer from 0. 240 Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilogram' seems to be countable, so consider using: "kilograms".kilograms
kilogram
 to 0. 110 Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilogram' seems to be countable, so consider using: "kilograms".kilograms
kilogram
 in 2004.

Another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 is chicken which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 upward trend that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
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grams
 per week consume by an individual to 200 Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: "grams".grams
gram
 in the next
 decade. Preference of eating chicken You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 over other, take the graph to the highest and reached 0. 250 Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilogram' seems to be countable, so consider using: "kilograms".kilograms
kilogram
 in 7 days in 2004.

Additionally
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 for fish and lamb You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
foods
 are A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.less
less in number
. There was no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in consumption of fish which remain constant Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 1979 and 2004".between 1979 and 2004
between 1979 to 2004
However
, lamb consumed by a person in 1979 was 150 Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: "grams".grams
gram
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
further
 to 70 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grams
 in next
 25 years.

Overall
, it is observed
 that chicken This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 an upward trend whereas This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 for lamb and beef reducing every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 and fish is always remain constant throughout the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. 