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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. naDg
The line chart indicates how many enquiries that the Tourist Information Office in one city received during the first half of 2011. Overall, it is clear from the chart that people preferred sending their enquiries by themselves and phone to sending through letter and email because the first two channel picked up the momentum since the second quarter. At the beginning, over 800 enquiries were sent by telephone, while letter and email were also made up a significant proportion. However, just around 400 enquiries were sent in person. After that, the number of enquiries via telephone was fluctuated untill showed a clearly tend on second quarter. of the year. it was increased since then. On the other hands, letter and email became the least popular channels with decreasing in the amount of enquiries and it had only under 400 enquiries in May and June. Lastly, sending enquiries in person was the most popularity method as the figures climbed up and reached the maximum at almost 2, 000 enquiries in June.
The line chart indicates how
many
enquiries
that the Tourist Information Office in one city received during the
first
half of 2011.

Overall
, it is
clear
from the chart that
people
preferred sending their
enquiries
by themselves and phone to sending through letter and email
because
the
first
two
channel
picked up the momentum since the second quarter.

At the beginning, over 800
enquiries
were
sent
by telephone, while letter and email were
also
made up a significant proportion.
However
,
just
around 400
enquiries
were
sent
in person.

After that, the number of
enquiries
via telephone
was fluctuated
untill
showed
a
clearly
tend on second quarter.
of
the year.
it
was increased
since then. On the other hands, letter and email became the least popular channels with decreasing in the amount of
enquiries
and it had
only
under 400
enquiries
in May and June.
Lastly
, sending
enquiries
in person was the most popularity method as the figures climbed up and reached the maximum at almost 2, 000
enquiries
in June.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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