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The graph below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. yjBD
The histogram illustrates regarding common impediments faced by people in different age groups while living overseas. In general, discovering the best place for children’s education is the least favourable challenge for all people while keeping healthy lifestyle is the most likely obstacles faced by people in 35 age and older. For the people who have 35-54 age, about nearly 20 percent of the total population suffer from finding best school for their children while living abroad. However, for the younger and older generations, only approximately 2. 5-5% of them feel the same difficult situations. Keeping the financial condition and healthier habit on the good track are the two most challenging aspects for foreigner. Above 30% of the total population in each age categories show the health-related problems are the most serious ones. Additionally, more than a quarter of each age-range seem that financial stability is more likely to be as most serious problem as immigrants.
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school for their children while living abroad.
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approximately 2. 5-5% of them feel the same difficult situations.

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are the two most challenging aspects for foreigner. Above 30% of the total population in each
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the health-related problems are the most serious ones.
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, more than a quarter of each age-range seem that financial stability is more likely to be as most serious problem as immigrants.
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