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The chart displays data about the variety of problems the three groups of ages face due to living abroad.

The chart displays data about the variety of problems the three groups of ages face due to living abroad. EWDq
The chart displays data about the variety of problems the three groups of ages face due to living abroad. Overall, the main problem that people age 35 to 55 face is sorting out healthcare, followed by sorting out finances issue. The least difficulty overall age group encounter is finding schools for children. The greatest trouble for younger people aged 18 to 34 is managing their money, a problem experienced by almost 35 percent of people in this age group, but this number is even higher for the 35-to54-year-olds age group. However, fewer people over 55 (28 percent) have this problem. More than 35 percent of the middle age group (35-to-54-year-olds) find that managing their health program is the most problematic. In comparison, the youngest age group finds this easier, and the percentage who have this particular issue is much lower, at 32 percent. Just like the middle age group, 36 percent of people in the oldest age group have trouble setting up their healthcare. Nevertheless, unlike the other two age groups, the oldest age group is the least who face difficulty in finding education for their kids.
The chart displays data about the variety of problems the three
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face due to living abroad.

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35 to 55
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is sorting out healthcare, followed by sorting out finances issue. The least difficulty
overall
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age
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encounter is finding schools for children.

The greatest trouble for younger
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aged 18 to 34 is managing their money, a problem experienced by almost 35
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in this
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,
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this number is even higher for the 35-to54-year-olds
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over 55 (28
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have this problem.

More than 35
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of the middle
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(35-to-54-year-olds) find that managing their health program is the most problematic.
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finds this easier, and the percentage who have this particular issue is much lower, at 32 percent.

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, 36
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in the oldest
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have trouble setting up their healthcare.
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, the oldest
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is the least who face difficulty in finding education for their kids.
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IELTS academic The chart displays data about the variety of problems the three groups of ages face due to living abroad.

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