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The line chart illustrated the figure of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a half-year period in 2011.

The line chart illustrated the figure of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a half-year period in 2011. K85R
The line chart illustrated the figure of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a half-year period in 2011. Overall, it can be clearly seen that although the number of letter and email decreased over time, the rest was uptrend. In January, the total inquiries in person and by telephone stood approximately at 400 and 900, respectively. Three months later, the figure of person type inquiries overcame the telephone type by roughly 200, which stabilized at 1200 in April. Consequently, both categories of inquiries continued their momentum, which later reached 1900 for the personal inquiries and 1600 for the telephone. Meanwhile, letter and email inquiries declined marginally from 800 to 700 within the first two months of the period. Subsequently, there was a sharp drop by 300 in the next two months. Finally, the figure levelled off roughly at 400 for a month.
The line chart illustrated the figure of
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received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a half-year period in 2011.
Overall
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clearly
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seen
that although the number of letter and email decreased over time, the rest was uptrend.

In January, the total
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inquiries
in person and by telephone stood approximately at 400 and 900,
respectively
. Three
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months
later, the figure of person type
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inquiries
overcame the telephone type by roughly 200, which stabilized at 1200 in April.
Consequently
, both categories of
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inquiries
continued their momentum, which later reached 1900 for the personal
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inquiries
and 1600 for the telephone.

Meanwhile, letter and email
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inquiries
declined
marginally
from 800 to 700 within the
first
two
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months
of the period.
Subsequently
, there was a sharp drop by 300 in the
next
two
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months
.
Finally
, the figure levelled off roughly at 400 for a
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month
.
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IELTS academic The line chart illustrated the figure of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a half-year period in 2011.

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3 paragraphs
147 words
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