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The table below depicts the information about the posts held by women in parliament and in management in 5countries in 2000.

The table below depicts the information about the posts held by women in parliament and in management in 5countries in 2000. xjGa
The assigned table chart illustrates the information regarding the seats in government and seats in management which were held by females in five nations in 2000. The data has been considered in proportion. Commencing at 54%, which was the highest number of seats occupied by women in a ministry in Canada, while 36% female selected for management working. Moreover, 23% and 40% women held for parliament and management respectively in Ukrainian. In Egypt, 52%females more interested in parliament work. However, 20% less women held management seats in same country. Probing further, 10% government posts adopted by women of Rome in 2000 which was the least seats held as compared to another given country, whereas 52% management seats occupied. Interestingly, in Italy, 40% women attracted towards parliament but only 25% female preferred to management posts. Overall, it can be witnessed from above graph that maximum government seats were held in Canada. Nonetheless, the lowest number of posts preferred Italy in given time.
The assigned table chart illustrates the information regarding the
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in five nations in 2000. The data has
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Commencing at 54%, which was the highest number of
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seats
occupied by
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women
in a ministry in Canada, while 36%
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selected for
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management
working.
Moreover
, 23% and 40%
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women
held for parliament and
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management
respectively
in Ukrainian. In Egypt,
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52%females
more interested in parliament work.
However
, 20% less
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women
held
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management
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seats
in same country.

Probing
further
, 10%
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posts adopted by
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of Rome in 2000 which was the least
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held as compared to another
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country, whereas 52%
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management
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occupied.
Interestingly
, in Italy, 40%
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women
attracted towards parliament
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25%
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Overall
, it can
be witnessed
from above graph that maximum
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seats
were held
in Canada. Nonetheless, the lowest number of posts preferred Italy in
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given
time.
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IELTS academic The table below depicts the information about the posts held by women in parliament and in management in 5countries in 2000.

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