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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. K6pk
The graph illustrates the number of queries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city for over a six-month period in 2011. Overall, the office got inquiries from the people in person or by Telephone. A very few people sent a letter or an email to the Tourist information office. Telephone queries fluctuated between 800-1000 for the first three months(Jan-March). However, the number of questions was consistent from March to April and then peaked at 1400 queries in the month of May followed by Jun, Transport office got 1600 queries. A few people followed the method of sending queries through email or letter. Initially, in the month of Jan, 800 emails were received by the transport office, which suddenly falls to 500 in the month of April and remains constant for the month of May and June (300 Queries). In the month of Jan, very few people required at transport office in personally(about 400 inquiries). However, the trend changes and it tends to be increased from the month of Jan to Jun, received more than 1800 queries, more than 50% of the first month.
The graph illustrates the number of
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received by the Tourist Information
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in one city for over a six-month period in 2011.

Overall
, the
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office
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inquiries from the
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people
in person or by Telephone. A
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few
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people
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sent
a letter or an email to the Tourist information office.

Telephone
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queries
fluctuated between 800-1000 for the
first
three months(Jan-March).
However
, the number of questions was consistent from March to April and then peaked at 1400
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queries
in the
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month
of May followed by Jun, Transport
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office
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got
1600 queries.

A few
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people
followed the method of sending
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queries
through email or letter.
Initially
, in the
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month
of Jan, 800 emails
were received
by the transport
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office
, which
suddenly
falls to 500 in the
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month
of April and remains constant for the
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month
of May and June (300
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Queries)
. In the
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month
of Jan,
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very
few
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people
required at transport
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office
in
personally
(about 400 inquiries).
However
, the trend
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changes
and it tends to
be increased
from the
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of Jan to Jun, received more than 1800
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queries
, more than 50% of the
first
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month
.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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