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The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city Newton between 1980 and 1996.

The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city Newton between 1980 and 1996. 5XMQ
The line chart demonstrates how many residents of Newton complained about four sources of noise to the organisation responsible for the health of the environment in their area. The data is provided for a 16 year span starting at 1980 Overall, for more people become discontented by the noise made by almost all the over this period. However, only in the case of road work, fewer people started feeling unhappy about the noise produced The data for complaints made due to domestic noise saw the steepest uptake. Its roughly 500 initially ended the period at over 1200. The indecations for factories and the noise from the traffic also witnessed similar uprising tendencies. They made up corresponding 700and 600 complaints in 1996In state contrast, the only falling pattern was recorded in the case of noise emitted by road works. There was a gradual fall in its index from over 600 till around 100 in 1980 and 1996 correspondingly.
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produced The data for complaints made due to domestic
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ended the period at over 1200. The
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from the traffic
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witnessed similar uprising tendencies. They made up corresponding 700and 600 complaints in 1996In state contrast, the
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emitted by road works. There was a gradual fall in its index from over 600 till around 100 in 1980 and 1996
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