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the chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurant between 2003 and 2013. summarise the information and make comparison where relevant.

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Given is a chart illustrating how many times American people ate fast food during a 10-year period. It is evident from the information supplied that the majority of people ate in fast food restaurants once a week or between once and twice a month in all years shown was more than others. Moreover, few people went to restaurant every day. As shown by the figure, rising gradually from 31% in 2003 to 33% in 2006, the proportion of American ate in fast food restaurant once a week then declined to 28% in 2013. In contrast the percentage of individuals who ate once or twice a month declined by 5% between 2003 and 2006, before increasing considerably to 34% in 2013. It is clear that people in the USA who ate fast food several times a week was at 20% in 2006, while this rate was around 16% in 2003 and 2013. At the same time, the trend for those in a few times category rose steadily by 2% from 2003 to 2006 and then remained stable at 15% until the end of the 2013. The chart for, who were in everyday and never eating categories was decreased over the given years.

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